My Retriever Lives

A Draft

Here is some draft lyrics to a bastardization of a church song, its the combined work of may people based on my original two lines. If you have any ideas as to what could fit in various parts, or something that should be discarded leave a comment. I'll update the post as suggestions are made.

I know he's chewed on my sole
His drool has covered my skin

I'll raise a ????? cos my dog has conqured the grave.
My retriever lives (x4)

He rips the curtains, I clean his poo.

updates:fixed spelling of “drool�

Comments

Christina

the "I'll raise a....etc" line could be, "He'll rise a hind leg". Dunno, it made sense at the time. And I mean, since dogs mark their territory :P

Matt

"I'll raise a kennel, cos my dog has conquered the grave"…?

And see if you can fit in (probably in the bridge) "He fetches all my tennis balls"

Fraser

This is a zombie dog, right?

Brehaut

Fraser, yes it is a zombie dog.

also, i have moderation on, so comments dont appear immediately, and the new spam protection is rather eager it seems, and it doesn't email me when it hold a comment in the queue.

AJ

I think if finished in time we should perform this anthem at our arena rock show in Ruth's flat. That's what I think. Y'all.